literature

Why?

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Literature Text

The smell of
the fresh green
grass, last cut
of the season

The cotton of
your red stained
shirt billows in
the swift breeze

The bark of
the neighbour’s dog
threatens you and
echoes for blocks

The grey pavement
surrounds, engulfs you
knocked down and
laughed at too

The taste of
the copper blood
dripping down your
tear drenched chin

Why did he
hit me again?
What did I
do to make
him so mad?
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A quick little one about bullying. It's supposed to a sensory poem of some sort, I suppose. Smell, touch, hear, see, taste was what I was going for. I don't really know if I got a proper touch in there though.
Anyhow, I liked the way it turned out. :)
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D-Prototype's avatar
So you're really against bullying too, huh?